Rough Draft

I decided my version of Rapunzel is going to be called Rattypunzel. It is about a girl with really long hair and she never wants to comb it. Her mom sends her to her room and won't let her come out until she combs it and still Rattypunzel refuses. 

These are my first two drafts of some spreads. I decided to use yarn as her hair because it has a not smooth texture and I can do lots of different stuff with it. I used magazine pictures as my base and added a few embellishments to make the images seem more realistic.

My book will probably be a 9x7 book and the first spread will be just a right side page. It is the page where we are first introducing Rattypunzel. I wanted this to take up most of the page so that I can start with a big image and then move to a smaller one. I haven't figured out what do do for my typography yet so I'm still brainstorming that one.

The second spread is a full spread and is when Rattypunzel is in her room and refuses to comb her hair. Her mom keeps thinking if enough time passes that she will surely comb her hair so she can come out of her room. The flowers kind of go with the wallpaper in the image but they add a little depth to the page. The ribbon is suppose to act like a valance on a window.